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  • 喜欢写诗~拙作求指导~
    There are days when I hid my tears and faked smiles
    When clouds could hardly hold back the raindrops
    The road ahead unclear but at least a thousand miles
    Cirrus twined, fog curtained all along themountain tops

    No one there to call, to accompany, to rely on and trust
    Loneliness echoed in the valley uttering adeep moan
    Harboring a sanctified heart in purgatory allowed no dust
    In an ancient way did the birds tweet and the bears groan

    Wordless when I stepped forward and cloudsbackwards
    Wrapped up the sad stories and forgot them in my memory
    Let there be light twinkling in mydarkness, my mind inwards
    Past untouchable, and future unpredictable will just be history

    There are no shameful tears or untruly smiles
    They only tell that you are more than fragile




    不才,没背过《诗韵》、《声律启蒙》之类的书,也只略读过《词律》、《词品》,不敢动手,只是怕对不住自己